Post by The Real Deal on Feb 12, 2008 18:50:36 GMT -5
Here we go with it:
Nice opening commentary actually, though a little unrealistic...I like how you're describing things though, so the new readers at WAL can understand what's going on. I like how you described your created wrestler also. ***
Almost a squash, but Scotty got some moves in. This really hypes Damon up and I'm actually quite interested to see what else you do with him. A decent match, sometimes your writing style is confusing though...But for hyping up a new superstar this match gets ***.
A really decent promo actually, although I don't think people here at WAL know the whole IWOW thing...But some of the sentences in there were really good. Good job. ***
A decent match. Nice to see women involved in some hardcore wrestling...Nice job.
Nice little aftermath promo.
Nice little set up for the upcoming match.
Meh...Confusing match...First you said belly to belly suplex then in the commentary German suplex...The only thing going for this match was you built up Kingston...But other than that, I think you got lazy...* and a half.
Note---It's step not steep. Fell and not Fail.
How did Storm get up so fast to throw a chair at Hero? A pretty good main event though...With some good spots, and I see you're trying to work on your psychology. I like Hero winning, since I have no idea who Shane Storm is. The match type was confusing too, because you said Hero was on the top rope, and Storm was on the second rope, but Storm couldn't reach Hero? I didn't think Hero was a midget. Good match none the less *** and a half.
The Lions cup match sounds interesting. The dialogue was real unrealistic though.
Jacobs wins...Nice match, now Tazz has something to make fun of Rotten with.
Overall a pretty decent showing of HWA. You still have to work on your spelling, and try rereading some of your matches to make them less confusing, but overall good show.
Nice opening commentary actually, though a little unrealistic...I like how you're describing things though, so the new readers at WAL can understand what's going on. I like how you described your created wrestler also. ***
Almost a squash, but Scotty got some moves in. This really hypes Damon up and I'm actually quite interested to see what else you do with him. A decent match, sometimes your writing style is confusing though...But for hyping up a new superstar this match gets ***.
A really decent promo actually, although I don't think people here at WAL know the whole IWOW thing...But some of the sentences in there were really good. Good job. ***
A decent match. Nice to see women involved in some hardcore wrestling...Nice job.
Nice little aftermath promo.
Nice little set up for the upcoming match.
Meh...Confusing match...First you said belly to belly suplex then in the commentary German suplex...The only thing going for this match was you built up Kingston...But other than that, I think you got lazy...* and a half.
Note---It's step not steep. Fell and not Fail.
How did Storm get up so fast to throw a chair at Hero? A pretty good main event though...With some good spots, and I see you're trying to work on your psychology. I like Hero winning, since I have no idea who Shane Storm is. The match type was confusing too, because you said Hero was on the top rope, and Storm was on the second rope, but Storm couldn't reach Hero? I didn't think Hero was a midget. Good match none the less *** and a half.
The Lions cup match sounds interesting. The dialogue was real unrealistic though.
Jacobs wins...Nice match, now Tazz has something to make fun of Rotten with.
Overall a pretty decent showing of HWA. You still have to work on your spelling, and try rereading some of your matches to make them less confusing, but overall good show.