Post by Hobo on Jul 19, 2008 20:59:11 GMT -5
Three cheers for complete copy and paste jobs, complete with non-working quotes from another forum!!!
zombies and HWA are in the fantasy booking world. In that world, JC Bailey signed a WCWA deal in early 2005 and stopped working the indies. He made good enough money in WCWA and didn't struggle with depression and drug abuse, so he never went to jail the first time. By 2007, he was enjoying success in HWA, so he didn't steal the TV from Walmart to go back to jail.
zombies, I'm so suprised by how much you're improving. When you first started, I'd read your stuff just to be a dick and point out all the flaws, honestly and truthfully. HWA has improved by leaps and bounds. This show really shows how much you've improved. I'm not gonna write out a full review right now, because I'm in a bit of a rush, but I'll bullet point.
Jul 12, 2008 0:26:39 GMT -5 @iyfwkidzc said:
Isn't JC Bailey in prison?zombies and HWA are in the fantasy booking world. In that world, JC Bailey signed a WCWA deal in early 2005 and stopped working the indies. He made good enough money in WCWA and didn't struggle with depression and drug abuse, so he never went to jail the first time. By 2007, he was enjoying success in HWA, so he didn't steal the TV from Walmart to go back to jail.
zombies, I'm so suprised by how much you're improving. When you first started, I'd read your stuff just to be a dick and point out all the flaws, honestly and truthfully. HWA has improved by leaps and bounds. This show really shows how much you've improved. I'm not gonna write out a full review right now, because I'm in a bit of a rush, but I'll bullet point.
- I'd suggest getting together as much information on your wrestlers as possible, then saving it all in a file on your computer. In my WCWA thread, I've got "bio cards" for the whole roster. I originally made these for my own sanity, so I didn't have to look up every which way but up to find information on all these people every show. It'll give a grade of consistancy to your shows and just look good over all.
- I'd suggest reading back over your stuff a little bit. You've still got a bit of a problem with the wrong words. Like brake instead of break. I'm not sure what you write your shows in, but I'd suggest finding something that picks up those errors.
- Larry Sweeney. I'd suggest improving him. Giving him the flavor that is Larry Sweeney. Introduce him as "Sweet & Sour" Larry Sweeney, babble about the ICW/ICWA Texarkana Television title, all the other Sweeney-isms. Sweeney's a character. Give him back his bullets!!
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