WWE The Commencement presents Wrestlemania 23

[Hobo]

One thing I really didn't like about this show is it REALLY seems to follow WWE. Like, i don't watch WWE, and really don't know the results, but there didn't seem like much rebooking of Mania 23 here at all. You probably could have just did "Cena beats HHH" type results for this show and accomplished the same thing, since nothing really got rebooked.

On future shows, I'd suggest going more in depth, establishing characters, who's heel, who's face, and why. Establish the way wrestlers move, act, and talk. Like, on interviews, type what they say. Do opening videos. Try commentary. My biggest suggestion is to just expand everything that you do, so everything is fuller and more completed thoughts.

[trips15]

oh yeah i am going to establish characters and stuff i just thought that for Mania since it was just letting everyone know what happened it didnt have to be that detailed. My first Raw will be detailed to the max though.

[Jay]

The Wrestlemania 23 card was cool because you did change things up a bit. You changed results...match order...and some other key things about the card. The only thing I disagree with is the fact that you used the SAME exact matches that were booked in real life. It wasn't bad, however, and I feel that if you are able to start fresh on this RAW, rather than continuing most of the storylines that WWE did in real life, then you have potential.

Also, I am a HUGE fan of presentation and taking your time on cards. You don't necessarily need to pump these bad boy's out so quickly...take your time, proofread, and make sure everything fits your standards. That is how truly legendary series' are created.

Overall, I liked your rebooking of some parts of Wrestlemania 23. It is a good launching point..and I would like to see if you improve on RAW the night after.

[trips15]

okay thanks for the reviews i will take what you say into account and yous the advice for my next show