Post by The Real Deal on Aug 15, 2006 17:57:46 GMT -5
Good way to open the show with Comissioner Mick Foley. I like how you have him as a heel in your fed a very interesting choice, can't wait to see how storylines build up with him. Good speech, but honestly I would have found it easier to read if the speech was more split up into different paragraphs than just one. Good way to open the show though.
**** out of *****
Well I guess I was kind of just jumping to conclusions but, wow, I really thought this match would be squash to put Woman over or something. Well I have to admit I have no a idea who Flower is, and if I would, I would have said decent match lol. But the finish sounded good.
*** out of *****
Good little aftermatch promo, your speech is great and I love how you focus on storylines more than matches, even though you have a stacked card of matches. I find storylines should be more detailed than matches to be honest. I think I know who Flower is from het speaking in Spanish, than again I may be wrong. Feud sounds good, wish I knew more about it.
*** out of *****
Whoa, did Jeremy write that promo or actually make that match? Because that seemed right out of Jeremy's Fantasy's! Well good to see Elsa Bangz on the show, against Maria Kanellis. It was what Obo...Errr...J said when Elsa was walking away. I can't believe I turned down an offer to work for XWF
**** out of ***** for actually making it seem like something J would do.
Sounded like a cool match, I see these two have a series of matches going on? That's cool, I can picture these two in the ring have a good match. Well I'm interesting of knowing what the record is between these two. Beauluh's winning it though which is cool.
*** out of *****
Cool promo. The dialogue really seemed to fit in place well which is cool. May I ask who's Travis, sorry if it's someone like legenday in BOOKing. Well my choice is Victoria to win this "tournament" type thing.
**** out of ***** for the speech really fitting in place.
Yay the Second City Saints and Generation Next. I don't think that Austin Aries would have won cleanly, unless Gen Next is a babyface stable in XWF...I think Gen Next would have somehow got involved, but I understand that you were trying to put Aries over in his debut.
*** out of *****
BOOOO! No Roderick Strong
. I guess Teddy is a good replacement though. This feud between Second City saints and Gen Next sounds solid. Oh boy, an International title match 
. that will be sweet! Good promo, for building up this feud and Aries more.
*** out of *****
This promo was good....LMAO, J stated that males can't wrestle females but look Dunn and Marcos are taking on Becky tonight lol. That's pretty funny. Dunn and Marcos will get schooled lol, I can't wait for this six man tag.
*** out *****
Sounded like a good match, I was expecting Talia to win for some reason, I guess it's good that Major has gotten back on the winning track. Wow, that's a long time since Major was booked.
*** out of *****
Whoa interesting promo lol, that was weird with the moaning...I bet that was J's idea too
. That was funny how Molly was so confident that she didn't even say what happens if they lose lol. The stipulations could have been a little better for the match though. Well the ending made me mad, since now I have to wait to see what happened
**** out of ***** for making me wonder what happened.
Good six man tag lol, Dunn and Marcos sounded like they sucked in that much but they were still able to keep the opponents distracted. Sounds cool, I was expecting Corino and CW to win, so it's cool that it was unexpected.
**** out of *****
Ooooooohhh, Jeremy get's a kiss
from Gail Kim . Well it would be nice to find out the rules to this thing lol. GO VICTORIA!!!
*** out *****
Wow. These announcements were sweet dude! Gang Warfare is looking good already, I can't wait till the 4 team battle royal! That sounds awesome. A seven rope battle royay, cool, cool. I hope Gail doesn't win.
**** out of *****
Definitely the best match of the night to be honest, not because of the detail though. This match reminded me a lot of ROH, which is weird for a Homeless Jimmy Match. I knew Punk was going to win, it's pretty predictable. The last paragraph was confusing in some parts though.
**** out of *****
Oh my god finally we see more building of the Red and Raven feud! AHHH!!! Jack Evans getting a push =-o. Cool promo. Ha, Evans getting nailed with his boombox.
**** out of *****
Maria is tough?! AHHH!! Good opening promo with Elsa...Good match, glad it wasn't a total squash match. Wow Maria really is a big player in XWF.
*** out of *****
Good match. Damn Jade Chung won, that sucks...But I guess it's for storyline purpouses. Ha, last segment was cool, can't wait to see what he does with Elsa.
*** out of *****
Well good and entertaining show. Very well booked. It's overall rating is ***** out of ***** stars.
**** out of *****
Well I guess I was kind of just jumping to conclusions but, wow, I really thought this match would be squash to put Woman over or something. Well I have to admit I have no a idea who Flower is, and if I would, I would have said decent match lol. But the finish sounded good.
*** out of *****
Good little aftermatch promo, your speech is great and I love how you focus on storylines more than matches, even though you have a stacked card of matches. I find storylines should be more detailed than matches to be honest. I think I know who Flower is from het speaking in Spanish, than again I may be wrong. Feud sounds good, wish I knew more about it.
*** out of *****
Whoa, did Jeremy write that promo or actually make that match? Because that seemed right out of Jeremy's Fantasy's! Well good to see Elsa Bangz on the show, against Maria Kanellis. It was what Obo...Errr...J said when Elsa was walking away. I can't believe I turned down an offer to work for XWF
**** out of ***** for actually making it seem like something J would do.
Sounded like a cool match, I see these two have a series of matches going on? That's cool, I can picture these two in the ring have a good match. Well I'm interesting of knowing what the record is between these two. Beauluh's winning it though which is cool.
*** out of *****
Cool promo. The dialogue really seemed to fit in place well which is cool. May I ask who's Travis, sorry if it's someone like legenday in BOOKing. Well my choice is Victoria to win this "tournament" type thing.
**** out of ***** for the speech really fitting in place.
Yay the Second City Saints and Generation Next. I don't think that Austin Aries would have won cleanly, unless Gen Next is a babyface stable in XWF...I think Gen Next would have somehow got involved, but I understand that you were trying to put Aries over in his debut.
*** out of *****
BOOOO! No Roderick Strong
. I guess Teddy is a good replacement though. This feud between Second City saints and Gen Next sounds solid. Oh boy, an International title match 
. that will be sweet! Good promo, for building up this feud and Aries more.*** out of *****
This promo was good....LMAO, J stated that males can't wrestle females but look Dunn and Marcos are taking on Becky tonight lol. That's pretty funny. Dunn and Marcos will get schooled lol, I can't wait for this six man tag.
*** out *****
Sounded like a good match, I was expecting Talia to win for some reason, I guess it's good that Major has gotten back on the winning track. Wow, that's a long time since Major was booked.
*** out of *****
Whoa interesting promo lol, that was weird with the moaning...I bet that was J's idea too
. That was funny how Molly was so confident that she didn't even say what happens if they lose lol. The stipulations could have been a little better for the match though. Well the ending made me mad, since now I have to wait to see what happened **** out of ***** for making me wonder what happened.
Good six man tag lol, Dunn and Marcos sounded like they sucked in that much but they were still able to keep the opponents distracted. Sounds cool, I was expecting Corino and CW to win, so it's cool that it was unexpected.
**** out of *****
Ooooooohhh, Jeremy get's a kiss
from Gail Kim . Well it would be nice to find out the rules to this thing lol. GO VICTORIA!!!*** out *****
Wow. These announcements were sweet dude! Gang Warfare is looking good already, I can't wait till the 4 team battle royal! That sounds awesome. A seven rope battle royay, cool, cool. I hope Gail doesn't win.
**** out of *****
Definitely the best match of the night to be honest, not because of the detail though. This match reminded me a lot of ROH, which is weird for a Homeless Jimmy Match. I knew Punk was going to win, it's pretty predictable. The last paragraph was confusing in some parts though.
**** out of *****
Oh my god finally we see more building of the Red and Raven feud! AHHH!!! Jack Evans getting a push =-o. Cool promo. Ha, Evans getting nailed with his boombox.
**** out of *****
Maria is tough?! AHHH!! Good opening promo with Elsa...Good match, glad it wasn't a total squash match. Wow Maria really is a big player in XWF.
*** out of *****
Good match. Damn Jade Chung won, that sucks
...But I guess it's for storyline purpouses. Ha, last segment was cool, can't wait to see what he does with Elsa.*** out of *****
Well good and entertaining show. Very well booked. It's overall rating is ***** out of ***** stars.