Jay
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Post by Jay on Jun 11, 2008 1:46:54 GMT -5
JAY ENTERTAINMENT PRESENTS: SMACKDOWN LIVE! "The Road to Steel City Showdown" www.freewebs.com/wwfonline/smackdown1.htmENJOY THE SHOW! AND IF YOU HAVE NOT YET READ MY FIRST RAW, CHECK THAT OUT AS WELL! I really feel that this show is one of my best efforts yet...and it really exemplifies what this series is all about. Reviews would be appreciated and I am going to work on a couple of reviews this week for you guys! THANK YOU AND ENJOY!!!!!!! |
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Post by trips15 on Jun 21, 2008 1:33:32 GMT -5
Best Match: Randy Orton vs Bret Hart
Worst Match: Mr Kennedy vs Goldberg
Best Promo: The first one with Shane, Bret Hart and Rated RKO
Worst Promo:William Regal
Additional Comments: The Randy Orton, Bret Hart match was sensational. I think it was so good because it is a perfect storyline since Orton is the Legend Killer. Kennedy, Goldberg was no good because okay Goldberg is a great wrestler but Kennedy is no push over and now if you give Kennedy a big push it will look stupid after Goldberg just steam rolled him that easily. The promo at the start was excellent i really enjoyed it and i actually read it to my freind over the phone it was that good. The thing that was bad about Regals promo was that Regal would not say Bastard and it kind of took a bit of his character away from him. Also during the matches maybe have less speeches from the wrestlers it is too unrealistic for my liking but that is just me. All in all great show can not wait to see what comes next.
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Jay
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Post by Jay on Jun 28, 2008 16:16:28 GMT -5
Ok..thanks for the review man. Here is my rebuttal:
The Mr. Kennedy/Goldberg thing was ONLY done as a way to make Goldberg look like he wasn't going to take any trash talking...and so that the segment could have time for him to get his ass kicked by Trips and HBK. Mr. Kennedy is one of my favorite wrestlers...and if ya think that this will make a big push look stupid, then you should go back and look at how he got rolled up by Super Crazy in his Beat The Clock Match a few years ago and lost in about 20 seconds. The fact of the matter is, Mr. Kennedy will be a integral part of my series...just not at this very moment. I have HUGE...and I mean HUUUUGE plans for him.
The point made about Regal is well taken...but I just didn't feel like using "toe-rag" so I used something else instead. LOL.
And the little comments from the wrestlers during the matches is something that I personally like when I hear it on TV. Like when Jericho yells, "COME ON, JUNIOR!!" to an opponent he is beating. Or when Ric Flair "WOOOOOO's!" in someones face. I love it...and its something that is going to stay.
Thank you for the kind words, my friend. Dude, honestly, if you were to detail your series better and TAKE YOUR TIME on everything, the thing would not only LOOK a lot better, but be a lot better overall. Just out of curiosity, how old are you man??
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Post by trips15 on Jun 29, 2008 20:13:17 GMT -5
i am 17 and i understand your rebuttals i was just wondering what was going on with some things so thanks for clearing that up. When will your next show be done by. Also if you could you write up a review for WWE Commencement Smackdown #1
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Jay
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Post by Jay on Jun 29, 2008 23:29:25 GMT -5
I'll throw you a review once I read through it in detail...
My show probably won't be done for a very long time, because honestly, I take my sweet ass time doing them and with the little time I have to write, it'll probably be late in the summer or something...
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